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23 August 2008 @ 10:03 am
[FIC] Change of Heart - Chapter Five  
Title: Change of Heart
Author: Amouralamer
Length: 5/20 (Unless LJ makes me split them up further)
Pairings: Jaejoong/Changmin, Others
Rating: Fic: Up to Nc-17, This Chapter: PG-13
Warnings: Melodrama? Fluffy sap?
Genre: Au, Romance, Smut, Fluffy sap (Flap?)
A/N: Cast pics and full A/N at the bottom of the page.
Summary: Jaejoong and Changmin are straight, college students and fellow co-workers. A night out starts a chain reaction that changes their lives forever.
(Okay, so I kinda like my summary, but it makes the story sound mysterious when it totally isn't so in the end my summary is fail. :( )

Disclaimer: If I had the money, I would buy them. I'd still let them release cds, but no one would be allowed to touch them. :) ♥Just me♥


"I want you to be my boyfriend."

Jaejoong is speechless. Finally, clearing his throat he tells Yoochun,
"I'm not gay."

"I don't see what personal proclivity has to do with anything when someone is paying you. Anyway, that wasn't what I meant. I would actually be paying you to pretend to be my boyfriend. For a specific length of time, say...six months?"

Jaejoong is still dazed, his mind was whirling. What exactly was Yoochun asking him to do for the money?
"Are you saying that you want me to..." Jaejoong gestures towards Yoochun vaguely with his hand.

Yoochun laughs, "I wouldn't be paying you to sleep with me if that is what you are asking. I just want it to look like you are madly in love with me.


"I have my reasons."

"Pretend to be your boyfriend? You say I wouldn't have to sleep with you, but what exactly would I have to do?"

"Basically, you would...damn. Here comes your friend." Leaning forward he spoke with quiet urgency. "Okay, listen. One thing I would insist upon is total secrecy, you couldn't tell anyone about our arrangements, understand? And I would be expecting a large measure of skinship. Enough to make it look believable." Pulling out a card Yoochun says, "Here are all my numbers. Call me later if you decide to accept my proposal. Remember. If you tell anyone about it the deal is off."
Getting up from his seat as Min reaches their table, Yoochun sees that his take out is ready. Walking up to the counter he grabs it and gives Jaejoong a cheery wave as he heads out the door.

Changmin notices that his Hyung is even more dazed than when he left and wants to know who that guy was. Jaejoong opens his mouth to tell Changmin what just happened, then stops. He can't see himself taking Yoochun up on his offer, but something won't let him reveal it.

"His name is Park Yoochun. I met him at a restaurant and invited him to come here."

"Jaejoong Hyung, you look beat. Just go home okay? I can close up."

Jaejoong looks like he is about to argue.

"Don't argue, just go!"

Seeing the determination on Changmin's face Jaejoong gives in and nods. Min is the one person who can get Jaejoong to lean on him. At least as much as Jaejoong ever leans on anyone.

"Thanks Min."

"Get some rest."

Patting Min on the shoulder as he passes, Jae heads outside, then stops. He doesn't feel like going home just yet so he decides to take a walk to help clear his head. Jaejoong has had a lot thrown at him in a short period of time and his mind was in chaos.

Thinking, not watching where his feet were taking him, Jaejoong is startled to hear someone call his name.

Looking up he sees that his wanderings have taken him past the house of one of his sisters. The weather was nice and she was out in the yard hanging clothes. Moving into the yard, he kissed his sister on the cheek as her one year old son toddled up to Jaejoong and raised chubby little arms. Scooping the baby up Jaejoong kissed him too.

"What are you doing here?" She asked him.

"I was just out walking and happened by."

"Are you in a hurry?"


She looked at him sheepishly.
"Then would you mind terribly if I took a shower while you watched the baby? I wouldn't ask, but it's so hard to find time to shower with little children around."

"Sure, go ahead. I don't mind."

"Thanks Jae! You're a life saver! I won't be long I promise!"

"Take your time." Jaejoong calls after her as she rushes into the house.

Noticing that his nephew was starting to nod off, Jaejoong settled into one of the lawn chairs with an armful of sweet, sleepy baby.

What a mess. he thinks to himself. He has never been so confused. Where was he going to get that kind of money? Yoochun's proposal...was ridiculous. Pretend to be Yoochun's boyfriend? Obviously they wouldn't be hiding their "love", otherwise what would be the point? And that meant that he would have to let people think that he was gay. Jaejoong shuddered to imagine the reactions he would get. And he wouldn't be able to tell anyone the truth. What would his family think if they found out? Junsu wouldn't mind, he didn't think, but his parents? That would be a fun conversation. Umma. Appa. I got drunk a couple of months ago and slept with a rude, vulgar, crass, "Titanic" hating shrew of a girl with absolutely no redeeming qualities and now she is having my baby. Oh and by the way, this is my boyfriend Yoochun.

Their imagined reactions make him cringe. He doesn't think he could ever go through with it. And he doesn't like the idea of all the deception. He's no good at it for one thing. Then he thinks that since he would be payed to be Yoochun's boyfriend he wouldn't technically be lying. He would just be the only straight guy in the entire world with a boyfriend.

Yoochun had mentioned skinship. A large measure of skinship, enough to make it seem believable. What exactly would that entail? Kissing certainly. Could he do that? Kiss another man? Touch another man and get touched in return? Like lovers? He just didn't think he could do it.

A noise from the baby returns Jaejoong to the present. Jae had been absentmindedly rubbing the baby's back as he slept.
Looking at his nephew's cute little face, smelling that wonderful baby smell, all of a sudden Jaejoong is struck with the reality of his own child. He had been so focused on the problem of getting his hands on the money, that the baby itself had been an abstract concept at best. Now he imagines sitting like this with his own child and suddenly Jaejoong knows that he will do anything to ensure that he gets that chance. His mental equanimity restored, he pulls out his cellphone and dials Yoochun's number.

"I'll do it."

Yoochun gives Jaejoong his address and tells him to come over tomorrow and they will iron out the details.


The next day Jaejoong thinks about the conversation he just had as he starts setting up Heechul's room for Eun Bi. The stupid woman actually wanted him to just give her the money and trust her to go through with her part of the deal.

As if.

After his conversation this morning with Yoochun Jaejoong knew just how he would need to handle the situation with Eun Bi. He spent the afternoon planning the whole thing out.

As much as he hated the idea, she would have to live with them until the baby was born. It was the only way he could make sure that she saw a doctor regularly and maintained a healthy lifestyle.

Once the baby was born and she had signed all the necessary paperwork, he would give her the money. Eun Bi had screamed and ranted at him, like he knew she would, but in the end she had agreed to his conditions. Jaejoong expected her to move in later this evening.

Oh, happy day.

Junsu's appearance in the doorway interrupted Jaejoong's mental sarcasm.

"I'm assuming, since you are packing up Chullie's stuff, that you got the money. What did Umma say?"

"The money isn't coming from Umma and Appa."

Su is confused, "Then...where did you get it?"

"Su, I have something to tell you." Taking a deep breath Jaejoong sits on the edge of the bed, looks up at his brother and gathering his courage he says,

"My...b-b-boyfriend is giving me the money."


Arriving at Yoochun's apartment building Jaejoong is surprised. He knew that Yoochun had to be extremely wealthy in order to pay Jaejoong so much money just to pretend to be his boyfriend, but seeing where Yoochun lived, Jae knew that the other man had to be astronomically rich.

Like Jaejoong's apartment building, Yoochun's had a lobby, but it also had a concierge who directed Jaejoong to Yoochun's apartment. The penthouse no less. Yoochun, like Jaejoong and Junsu had a three bedroom apartment, but their apartment could fit inside of his with room to spare.

He lived there with his friend, someone named Joo Jihoon. Yoochun had mentioned that Jihoon was gone at the moment. Apparently Jihoon was a photography major, but even though he was still a student his freelance work was highly sought after. He sounded to Jaejoong kind of like a Changmin with a camera.

Taking the seat that Yoochun indicated, Jaejoong refused his offer of a drink. Sitting on the sofa Yoochun gives Jaejoong a little smile.
"I was pretty sure you were going to tell me no."

"That makes two of us."

"What made you change your mind?"

Jaejoong just shrugged, not wanting to discuss such personal business with someone he hardly knows. Yoochun respects his silence and changes the subject. Reaching into a drawer in the coffee table he pulls out a manilla envelope.

"Just in case you did agree", he says as he removes some papers from the envelope. "I had my lawyer draw up a contract."

Jaejoong is surprised. "I thought you didn't want anyone to know?"

Yoochun corrects him. "No, I don't want you to tell anyone. I can tell whomever I want."

Smiling at Jaejoong Yoochun says, "I don't mind my lawyer knowing. Everything with him is confidential. And I told my roommate because I trust Jihoon implicitly. No one else can know though."

Jaejoong is starting to feel nervous.
"Why do we need a contract?"

"Generally, I like things to be spelled out. That way there is no room for misunderstandings. In this case however, I also want to be able to impose...consequences."

"Consequences? What consequences? Consequences for what?"

Yoochun waves away his concern. "We'll get to that in a minute. First let's go over the contract and what I would expect from you."

Yoochun went on to explain to Jaejoong the "rules":
1. He can't treat it like a joke. Ever.
2. He must treat Yoochun, at all times, like a lover.
3. He must be willing to fully participate in skinship.
4. He cannot divulge the truth to anyone.
5. He cannot date any girls for the duration of their agreement.
6. He must do exactly as Yoochun says at all times.

For all intents and purposes Jaejoong would be Yoochun's boyfriend for six months.
Handing Jaejoong the contract Yoochun tells him,

"If you fail to meet any of these points the deal is off and you forfeit the money. In addition to this you will also go to prison for theft, a crime that gets you ten years unless you get time off for good behavior."

Jaejoong is shocked.
"What?! How could I be sent to prison? I haven't stolen anything."

"You will." Yoochun smiles at him. "My safe has a security camera inside of it. My Halmonie, among other things, left me her favorite diamond necklace. If you agree to the conditions of the contract, then before you leave today, you will reach into my safe and make it look as if you are stealing my Halmonie's necklace. Being sure to give the camera a clear view of your face and leaving your fingerprints all over the safe and it's contents. If you break the contract in any way I will report the necklace stolen and submit the security tapes to the police."

Jaejoong says, "What is to stop you from doing that anyway just to get out of paying me?"

"That is a risk you are going to have to take." Sitting forward Yoochun gets serious. "Look, Jaejoong, I'm not trying to scare you away. Just the opposite. I very much want you to agree to this. You really don't have to worry that I'll cheat you. I have more money than I know what to do with. Besides the fact that my family is obscenely wealthy and I am their only heir, my Halmonie was almost as rich and since she hated my Father and never forgave my Mother for marrying him, she left all her money to me."

Yoochun gave Jaejoong a cheeky grin. "I was her favorite anyway. Believe me, I could burn the money I am offering you and never lose a moments sleep over it, I'd never even know it was gone. The money means nothing to me. In fact, if I had never met you, but overheard the conversation between you and your friend I would just have found out who you were and anonymously made the money appear in your bank account. But I want something from you so it becomes a business arrangement instead.

These stipulations are simply to make sure that you are taking this as deadly serious as I am. Because, make no mistake, I am expecting something in return for my money and it isn't just the pleasure of your company. If it were, I'd want a hell of a lot more that just skinship."

Running his hands through his hair Yoochun said,
"You need to understand, this is very important to me so don't think I won't follow through on turning you over to the police if you mess this up. You must make absolutely sure you really want to do this because once you sign these papers you are committed. It MUST look like we are lovers. You will have to get used to touching and kissing me and being touched and kissed in return. We won't be sleeping together, but that is about the only thing we won't do together. I will be all over you. In private and in public."

"I have a question. You really are gay, you won't be pretending. Are you interested in me?"

Yoochun shakes his head. "I'm not. I like you Jaejoong, but not like that."

"Then why will you be "all over me" in private?"

"In order for us to be believable we need, in essence, to BE boyfriends for the next six months. If we aren't used to touching each other when no one is around we run the risk of not being believable when it counts the most."

Nodding, Jaejoong takes a deep breath at what he is about to do. His instincts about people are usually good and right now they were telling him that he could trust Yoochun. Still, it was a hell of a gamble if he turned out to be mistaken.

Seeing Jaejoong's hesitance, Yoochun knows that the other man might not be up to this. As Jaejoong reaches for the burgundy fountain pen laying on the table Yoochun places his own hand over Jaejoong's, stopping him. Jaejoong looks at him questioningly.

"I think before you sign the papers we need to practice a little. It won't do either one of us any good if you decide later on that you can't go through with it after all."

Jaejoong jumps a little and swallows hard. "O-okay."

Yoochun laughs. "Oh, come on! I'm not that ugly!"

Jaejoong smiles at that, knowing he is being silly, but still a little freaked out. "Sorry."

As Yoochun leans over him, Jaejoong tries to make light of the situation.
"I feel I should warn you."

"Warn me?"

"The last person I kissed, ended up pregnant."

"I like kids. Now shut up and come here."

Jaejoong hadn't realized it, but as Yoochun leaned forward, he leaned back, away. Sitting up he let Yoochun take his face in gentle hands. Jae's breathing quickened as Yoochun's lips approached his face. Only an iron grip on himself prevented his bolting for the door. Then it happened. Yoochun was softly brushing his lips against Jaejoong's. Back and forth, then up and down. A little nibbling of his bottom lip. Jaejoong was concentrating so hard on not freaking out that he didn't notice at first when Yoochun stopped kissing him.





"Look at me."

Only then did Jaejoong realize how stiff he was. His jaw was clenched, his eyes were scrunched tight and his hands were balled into fists. Relaxing all that actually hurt. It didn't help that Yoochun was obviously laughing at him.

"Maybe you should have that drink after all."

Knowing that he needed to loosen up, Jaejoong decides to break his promise to himself of not drinking anything alcoholic in the face of his difficulties. He was willing to lose some brain cells if it helped him through this awkward situation.
And anyway...Changmin will never know.

"Maybe you're right."

As Yoochun went to get him a drink, Jaejoong tried to calm himself down. I can do this. He thought.

Yoochun handed him a glass of wine and as Jaejoong tipped it up and drank it all in one go, he told Jae,
"Try not to think so much. Just kiss me like you would kiss a girl. We have no intentions of doing anything beyond kissing so you don't have to worry about where this is all going."

Nodding, Jaejoong set his now empty glass on the coffee table.

Yoochun leaned back against the cushions.
"You kiss me this time."

Getting a grip on himself Jaejoong tentatively presses his lips to Yoochun's expecting Yoochun to take control of it, but Yoochun just sat there, unresponsive. He tells Jaejoong again,
"Don't think. Make me give in."

Moving in again, Jaejoong closes his eyes and tries not to think about the fact that he is kissing another guy. Instead he focuses on how soft Yoochun's lips were. It really is kind of like kissing a girl. Pretending he really was kissing a girl helped him to relax.

Once he feels Jaejoong relax a little, Yoochun starts to respond and they kiss in earnest. Feeling a tongue flick at the corner of his lips Jaejoong instinctively opens his mouth in invitation. Yoochun wastes no time taking advantage of the situation and deepens the kiss. After a moment, Jaejoong comes up for air and is shocked to remember that he is actually kissing a man.

Yoochun smirks,"That wasn't so bad, was it?"

Yoochun can see the surprise in Jaejoong's eyes as he mutely agrees.

"So. Do you think you can do this?"

"Yeah. I think so."

"You don't sound very convincing."

"It's hard. Harder than I thought. I feel like I'm doing something wrong. No offense."

"It's okay. I know what you mean. Most men feel the same way you are when they first start to find themselves attracted to other men."

"Did you?"

"Not really. My first crush was my best friend. My best friend at the time, and we kind of just fell into it. Our friendship just...evolved, I guess."

"What happened?"

Yoochun just shrugged and Jaejoong dropped the subject.

As Jaejoong got ready to sign the papers, Yoochun says,
"This is your last chance to back out. Once you sign there is no going back. I don't want you to do anything you'll regret."

Yoochun's words make Jaejoong feel a little more confident in his decision. He signs the contract and "steals" Halmonie's necklace, being sure to give the camera in Yoochun's safe his best "thug" look.

At Yoochun's insistence they spend the next half hour practicing some more and Yoochun asked Jaejoong when his next days off are.

"I work two jobs. I don't have days off. Why?"

Yoochun looks disappointed.
"Well, that won't work. How do you work two jobs and go to school?"

"I don't. I only get a second job during summer break. I'll be quitting my second job as soon as school starts again."

Thinking things over, Yoochun nods decisively.
"You'll have to quit now."

"What?! I'm not quitting early!"

"Have you forgotten so soon? You agreed to do whatever I ask of you."

Opening his mouth to argue, Jaejoong realizes that there is nothing he can say.
"Well, in that case, I guess I'll have the next two days off."

"Perfect. I want you to go home, pack a bag and be back by this evening. We can spend the next two days becoming a couple."

With a sigh, Jaejoong resigned himself to the fact that he would spend the next two days being molested.


Pushing the thought of his upcoming ordeal out of his head, Jaejoong looks at his dongsaeng. Junsu is shocked to his core.

"Su? Does this change the way you feel about me?"

Junsu rushes to reassure him. "NO! Hyung no, I just...I'm...I never...How...How long have you been seeing this guy? Who is he? How...how long have you been gay?" Su pushes his hands into his hair and tugs. "I thought you liked girls!"

Jaejoong tells Junsu how he met Yoochun. He tells him that he has never had a boyfriend before. Which is true. He tells him that he has never looked at a man in that way before. Which is also true, but that he couldn't turn Yoochun down. Which is true as well, but makes it sound much more romantic than saying,
"I met this guy who offered me a million dollars to be his bitch. And I said yes."

Junsu would never have guessed that his Hyung was gay. He thinks about their parents. He thinks about the fact that if he told his brother he was gay, Jae would understand.

Then Junsu thinks about Ye-ryeon and knows he still can't say anything about his homosexuality.

"I know it's a shock. Please don't tell Umma and Appa." Jaejoong was still hoping that his six months of living an "alternate lifestyle" would pass by undetected by his parents. "They'll be shocked enough when I tell them about the baby."

Junsu assures Jae that he won't.
"Actually, I have some news of my own."

At Jaejoong's questioning look Su tells him that he asked Ye-ryeon to marry him.
"She said yes. We're getting married."

Jaejoong is overjoyed for his brother and he already loves Ye-ryeon like a sister.

As Junsu helps Jaejoong make the bed for Eun Bi, they make vague plans to take a trip home to tell their parents about the baby and Su's engagement. Junsu spots a book on the nightstand,
"The Baby Book: Everything You Need to Know About Your Baby From Birth to Age Two".

Picking it up he asks,
"What's this?"

Taking the book from Junsu, Jaejoong idly flipped through the pages, a little embarrassed.
"I thought, since I don't really know a lot about babies and my child won't have a Mother, that I should probably read up on the subject. I don't want to make any mistakes."

Looking up at Junsu with wonder spreading across his face, Jaejoong said,
"Su...I'm going to be a Dad."

Jaejoong's smile was as wide as the world and as Junsu pulled him into a tight hug, Su would swear that his Hyung was shining.




*This is my first chaptered fic. So please comment if you like it.

*I know it's awkward, hopefully my writing will improve with practice.

*I only speak a little Korean, just enough to probably make me sound stupid so if there are mistakes, that is why.;) I WILL learn it eventually! Me Hwaiting!

*The same goes for any mistakes in the medical...thingies that Changmin says, except that I WILL NOT learn it eventually! XD Me Hwaiting!

*I hope you enjoyed this chapter and I hope you enjoy the story as a whole.

Thanks so much for reading!

Comments are <3!

:) Seriously though, I really do appreciate it when people take the time to comment. ♥

And as promised, cast pics!

The lovely Kim Jaejoong! Okay. So I put in the smaller pic, but I added a second one!

The exquisite Shim Changmin!

Horikita Maki

The charismatic Kim Junsu!


The aegyo Jung Yunho!


The sultry Park Yoochun!

The delectable Joo Jihoon!

Kim Heechul. How can you not love Chullie!

Kang Eun Bi. Blech!

Current Mood: refreshedrefreshed
Current Music: Yodel Song by Bi in "I'm a Cyborg, but that's Ok"
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Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 23rd, 2008 05:39 pm (UTC)
Hahaha! Okay, okay! *whispers* There will be some JaeMin by the end of the week!

Smut too. But I won't tell you if it is JaeMin smut! XP 8P 8D
Laurachangminiminmin on August 23rd, 2008 05:04 pm (UTC)
damn still not jaemin xD
Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 23rd, 2008 05:41 pm (UTC)
LOL! Not yet! It will come, I promise!
jedi_babyjedi_baby on August 23rd, 2008 05:12 pm (UTC)
zomg. i could just picture all the problems that are about to arise TT.TT
Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 23rd, 2008 05:44 pm (UTC)
Yes, a lot can happen. XD Oh, the drama......

Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 23rd, 2008 05:46 pm (UTC)
Yes, Yoochun likes to have all his bases covered!

Thanks for reading and commenting!
紫のチャンミンkurogoma on August 23rd, 2008 06:32 pm (UTC)
the only thing i am iffy about is the need for yoochun to have jaejoong act as though he is stealing from him. i didn't think that was necessary and could spell alot of complications later on.... makes yoochun seems rather cold and business-like too.
Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 23rd, 2008 07:23 pm (UTC)
Yoochun is a nice guy, but he does have a tendency to want revenge, hence his plan to use Jaejoong to hurt Yunho. He wants his plan to hurt Yunho to succeed so having a means to send Jaejoong to prison accomplishes two things,
One: It makes sure that Jaejoong will adhere to the letter of the contract. From Yoochun's point of view the only thing keeping Jaejoong in compliance with his scheme is the money. Money has no value to Yoochun so he doesn't see it as a strong enough incentive and,
Two: It gives him a way to exact revenge against Jaejoong if Jae messes up his plans.

Emotional + Need for revenge = Yoochun

I actually debated on whether or not to have that part in there because I was afraid I wouldn't be able to adequately express the entirety of the concept.
One of the problems with my writing is that I see things in my head very visually and so I sometimes forget that others don't see what I see and leave stuff out because to me it seems obvious. So much of the scenes in my head depend on gestures and body language...
But then, if I were directing Dbsk nothing would get done because the boys would be constantly trying to keep me from molesting them. xp Who knows, maybe they wouldn't be trying that hard! I can dream!

Thanks for reading and commenting!:)
emda: Jaejoongemda on August 23rd, 2008 08:38 pm (UTC)
this story seems very very interesting. Im looking forward to the Jaechun and the rest of the affairs.
Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 23rd, 2008 11:09 pm (UTC)
hollyhock: brokebackhollyhockyuu on August 23rd, 2008 11:01 pm (UTC)
=O Now everything is more difficult =_________= good job Joongie XD

ToT Ohh I need JaeMin too n_n they are my OTP
Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 23rd, 2008 11:11 pm (UTC)
JaeMin is my OTP too. They'll appear I promise!!!

Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 24th, 2008 10:37 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! ♥
Melodykratynoi on August 24th, 2008 06:46 am (UTC)
OMG~!!! Jaejoongie!!!! I want to hug him so badly~! He's so excited to be a dad and it's the most heartwarming thing EVER! Awwwww~

Yoochun was a little creepy in this chapter. I guess after he kind of explained his reasonings for all those precautions I kind of understood him...but still...

Junsu~ why are you marrying someone you don't love love. :(

And where's my JaeMin~!? XD
Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 24th, 2008 10:39 am (UTC)
Thanks! And JaeMin is coming! I promise! LOL!
지지epiktraveller on August 24th, 2008 08:34 am (UTC)


how come there's stil none.......??

Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 24th, 2008 10:41 am (UTC)
Lmao! There are 20 chapters to my fic and we are only on Chapter Five. There will be JaeMin, I swear! LOL!
(no subject) - epiktraveller on August 24th, 2008 10:47 am (UTC) (Expand)
yapschan on August 24th, 2008 10:20 am (UTC)
this chap rocks yoochun is like a prince a bratty prince I lovee it !! thx for sharing
Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 24th, 2008 10:43 am (UTC)
Thanks! I love Chunnie!

Thanks for reading and commenting!
&katya;: DBSK - CM - Shim minuskatzk on August 24th, 2008 09:44 pm (UTC)
Just read all 5 chapters in one sitting (recommended by a friend). It's an exciting story and I can't wait for more of it! I was curious how you were going to turn straight men into gay men. I like the difficulty Jaejoong is having with the whole situation of having to be with another man. Their first kiss was written well, I could feel how stiff and awkward Jae was. Can't wait for new chapters! ^^b
Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 24th, 2008 10:13 pm (UTC)
Thanks! Such a nice comment! And the fact that someone recommended my fic to you has made my day! ♥

Laurennarcolept_smurf on August 25th, 2008 03:30 am (UTC)
Aw, Jae's so cute about being a daddy ^_^ And this arranged relationship should be veeeeeeery interesting ^_^
Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 25th, 2008 10:43 am (UTC)
Yes, Jae is a sweetheart. He's such a cute dork in real life that I just want to SQUEEEEEEEEEEZE him!

Thanks for reading and commenting!
(no subject) - narcolept_smurf on August 25th, 2008 12:40 pm (UTC) (Expand)
lil_tvxqcamperlil_tvxqcamper on August 28th, 2008 11:07 pm (UTC)
That was a very interesting chapter... Yoochun is the guy and kinda mean with the stealing thing, but sooooo business like, guess Yunho was his best friend huH? no wonder he's that hurt T_____T I would be too, but this is just too much, I wonder if he's Junsu's last guy, that would be double trouble, right? Aw man, that sucks, I wonder if there will be drama coming up it's relaly getting to me, but I guess I'm going to sleep now, cuz it's already 1 am and I'll keep on reading tomorrow hehe^^
Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 29th, 2008 01:02 am (UTC)
*waves* See you tomorrow.
realitywaiting on August 30th, 2008 03:50 pm (UTC)
I had one heck of a time figuring out where i left off since i've been busy "moving in"...turns out it was only at chapter five *fails* but whoa! and ...WHOA! yay more chapters for me though! XD
Benevolent Dictatoramouralamer on August 31st, 2008 04:52 am (UTC)
You had a lot of catching up to do! :)